Design Research Dissertation | Project 2
29/05/2020 - 19/06/2020 (Week 7- Week 11)
Yeo Ava 0340222
Design Research Dissertation
Project 2 - Complete Dissertation with Visual Design Publication
Instructions
Project 2
Week 7 (17/04/2020)
Week 10 (10/05/2020)
Submissions
Below is my complete book in PDF :
Flipbook :
Feedbacks
Week 7
No need to include bibliography of the journal articles into the literature review. And also i should write about how it relates to my research at the begining or ending of each topic. Try to fit in all 7 critical reviews. The book should be in A5 size and the references looks interesting. I am good to go on the literature reviews but I still have to try to add in my last crtitical review.
Week 8
Hi Ava, below is my feedback to your dissertation draft. Please make the necessary amendments for the final submission.
• Critical Discussion: Discussion was conducted with the description of how typeface work alongside other design elements to create effective print ads. These elements should be discussed further within the context of the message in the ads. The discussion would be more dynamic if survey data is included.
• Application of research: Applied accordingly.
• Written communication skills: Able to communicate well with good writing skills.
• Overall structure: Organised and sections are well laid out in sequence, making sense to the reader. Research Methodology section needs to be more thorough (refer to detailed comments are found in Google Docs).
• References, picture credits, appendices: Applied accordingly.
• Critical Discussion: Discussion was conducted with the description of how typeface work alongside other design elements to create effective print ads. These elements should be discussed further within the context of the message in the ads. The discussion would be more dynamic if survey data is included.
• Application of research: Applied accordingly.
• Written communication skills: Able to communicate well with good writing skills.
• Overall structure: Organised and sections are well laid out in sequence, making sense to the reader. Research Methodology section needs to be more thorough (refer to detailed comments are found in Google Docs).
• References, picture credits, appendices: Applied accordingly.
Week 9
Dr Jin Chi suggested that i put relevant images into my book layout, in order to match the contents of my research. For example, under literature review i can include a picture of a person reading, under research methodology I can include a picture of a person interviewing or giving out surveys. Black and white pictures will be more suitable for my layout. I may also add some background pictures and tweak the opacity of it so. Do not forget to credit the pictures.
Week 11
I told Dr JIn Chi about my situation about my laptop and she told me to update her. I would stillbe able to turn in the pdf for turn it in.

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